Intriguing

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Part one and the way the writing is set out, I thought it was going to be a poem throughout, not that I would of minded, and it makes it for an intriguing start.
By the time we got to part two, there wasn't much left to read of the first impression, but it did stop on a part that makes you want to read on, that makes you wonder what happens after the flash of white.