Wow! I loved the beginning of this, the way it was written, like poetry was beautiful and such a change from the norm. It flowed so well and really drew me in to the story in a different way. I also liked how the modern day story is interspersed with the grandfathers memories, it's nice to see the reaction to the story as it unfolds.
I want to see what happens after the bomb drops, how the story unfolds what the guilt is about and I hope that it continues to be written in such a beautiful way.
I want to see what happens after the bomb drops, how the story unfolds what the guilt is about and I hope that it continues to be written in such a beautiful way.