Very atmospheric with good visual imagery, the scene {s} are set with clarity and intrigue.
There's a lot of tension here, from the first segment with an unnamed character to the tensions between a family, then onto some slightly "dodgy" types. We meet several characters quite quickly, mostly not especially likeable, but all intriguing enough to want to learn more about them and how their lives tangle together.
Definitely want to read the rest!
There's a lot of tension here, from the first segment with an unnamed character to the tensions between a family, then onto some slightly "dodgy" types. We meet several characters quite quickly, mostly not especially likeable, but all intriguing enough to want to learn more about them and how their lives tangle together.
Definitely want to read the rest!