I can’t tell where this is going and I like that! I’m not sure if Eddie is going to avoid Sarah because she’s going to become a stalker. Or if he’s gone missing and she’ll have to solve the mystery of what happened. This has the potential to go very well, or fall flat with a boring finale like him already being married and only after a fling (which would be a cop-out).
The cover is dull. It needs some clues or hints. Or at least the suggestion that there’s a bit of mystery rancher than it being a clean cut lovey-dovey narrative. The blurb and concept is good, but I wouldn’t pick this up based upon the cover.
The cover is dull. It needs some clues or hints. Or at least the suggestion that there’s a bit of mystery rancher than it being a clean cut lovey-dovey narrative. The blurb and concept is good, but I wouldn’t pick this up based upon the cover.