Okay, so I'm thinking about this mystery now! Great use of letter form to open the story, allowing us to access inner thoughts. Nice layers building up the plot through the opening chapter and some really lovely natural melodic descriptions of the natural world around the characters.
I'd be happy to read on... I need to know why HE DIDN'T CALL! ;-)
I'd be happy to read on... I need to know why HE DIDN'T CALL! ;-)