My first impression instantly put me on edge, the rising action sounds incredible as we slowly are shown a wide range of senses, potential romance and hidden mystery
The tension gradually increases at a balanced speed that isn't too slow or too quick, it's perfect. I'd love to read more and really figure out what this story is about. But to also uncover the secrets within.
The tension build and thrill within the introduction is just incredible itself
The tension gradually increases at a balanced speed that isn't too slow or too quick, it's perfect. I'd love to read more and really figure out what this story is about. But to also uncover the secrets within.
The tension build and thrill within the introduction is just incredible itself