Not enough to give a good idea
Once I got over the strange writing style (too many short sentences) I got into the action ... to a certain extent.
In such a short extract it wasn't enough to find out what was happening and who the characters were.
It is a promising start, but it could go either way.
In such a short extract it wasn't enough to find out what was happening and who the characters were.
It is a promising start, but it could go either way.