We start the story knowing who the baddie is. We know his name and where he works. He has just discovered that the girl who got away has written a book detailing what happened the night he killed her family. He has never been caught, but he is now worried and picks up the book to read it.
I like this quick start to the story. No preamble just straight in.
I like this quick start to the story. No preamble just straight in.