This seems to be a style of book that I would usually go for. There is just enough in the blurb to grab your attention, however it is written in a confusing way. Perhaps it is too soon to mention the third character Jay? The cover is simple, but suggests what the book is about without giving anything away. However, the cover style and book title seem to be targeting an audience of perhaps 16-21 year olds. The cover seems to be set in a school rather than an office.