This reads like a screenplay - just enough description to set the scene or identify the characters without unnecessary embellishment. There is, however, irony and subtle humour which I enjoyed.
The 'facts' about the ancient walls and the newspaper article at the beginning have sparked my interest and I want to find out more about whether this is true.
Atmospheric cover. I expect this is going to turn into another Scooby Doo type of adventure for Nolan Moore and his gang of investigative reporters.
The 'facts' about the ancient walls and the newspaper article at the beginning have sparked my interest and I want to find out more about whether this is true.
Atmospheric cover. I expect this is going to turn into another Scooby Doo type of adventure for Nolan Moore and his gang of investigative reporters.