Immersive but too many details.
The introduction was very basic: a high action point (which will confuse the readers, but also make them read more, which was true for me)
I had many questions at the very beginning (such as who is she running away from?), which led me to read more.
I have to say that I skimmed over some parts. This was because there was a dump of background information. That wasn’t an impressive technique.
I continued and I found it to be slow and dragging on. However there was a minor plotwist, which made me want to read more.
Overall, writing style is good (could be better). Very interesting concept choice.
The cover is captivating and beautifully designed.
I had many questions at the very beginning (such as who is she running away from?), which led me to read more.
I have to say that I skimmed over some parts. This was because there was a dump of background information. That wasn’t an impressive technique.
I continued and I found it to be slow and dragging on. However there was a minor plotwist, which made me want to read more.
Overall, writing style is good (could be better). Very interesting concept choice.
The cover is captivating and beautifully designed.