Desperate & emotional

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These opening chapters pull you relentlessly into the desperation of Lelle's life since his daughter disappeared. The anguish is shown in telling descriptions, visualising he can still see her, his guilt about smoking & how she'd tell him off.
The introduction of Meja's story suggests there will be a twist.
Already I feel a sense of unease and would love to read more.