I'm hooked
The scene is set beautifully.
After the first few lines I want to know more, I want to join the main character and journey with him.
I can't wait to see how the story twists and turns and eventually ends up.
After the first few lines I want to know more, I want to join the main character and journey with him.
I can't wait to see how the story twists and turns and eventually ends up.