It was a little bit confusing to figure out that there were two stories being told simultaneously. I feel the story go faster if there are dialogues dominant, so it felt a bit of work to read through all descriptions. I understand that they are important to depict the state of mind and atmosphere.
Overall the story got me hooked and I really want to find out, what actually happened and what Meja got to do with it all.
Overall the story got me hooked and I really want to find out, what actually happened and what Meja got to do with it all.