A potential page turner

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The writing style is quiet interesting, very evocative. It seems to resemble the character's train of thoughts and increasing mania, which is very suggestive. I would have preferred if the beginning was slightly "slower" to get to know the main character a little better before jumping into the deep end where there is a lot happening and a lot of information given. It could be a gripping page turner by what I have read so far!
The cover is okay, although while I think the top and the bottom sentences serve the purpose of the narrative, the writing at the centre is not necessarily, makes it look to busy.