A really engaging start - excited to see how the story develops

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I felt like it would've been nice if some of the characters relationships to each other were explained earlier, however this might be a plot point so I'm intrigued to see where that goes. The writing had a really good flow to it and the relationship between the characters Bee and Loo hooked you into the story straight away.
Also really like the concept of 2 different timelines taking place in the same house - again it really draws you in and gets you wanting to know more.