Made me want to keep reading

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The fact that from the start the readers are made aware that something momentous happens on the day when the photograph was taken means that you are instantly drawn into the story. There is an element of wanting to know what happened and why. The story is going to play out over a greater amount of time so it will be a while before you find out. This adds an element of wanting to find out more.