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Not only does this first look allow us to engage and feel sympathetic for this young lady who so desperately wants a child, but it also gives us a sense of mystery and concern.

The baby’s mother abandoned her and for what reason?
Ellen desperately wants a child, is now her chance?

What could the mother, the baby, or their family had done to put the baby at so much risk?

Why can’t she trust the police?
What are they going to be running from?

This extract leaves the reader feeling all types of emotions and with lots of questions running through their mind.

I think that this book will grip onto anyone that begins to read it! Not only is it providing an unexpecting lady with a child, but it’s forcing her to protect its life from anything and everything.

What could happen if they get caught?


The writing style seems quite smooth and allows the reader to understand and follow along easily. This may help for the reader to follow the suspense and consume more questions.