Honestly it sounds like it could be a great read but the first little bit wasn't that hooking (for lack of a better word) it still sounds amazing I would really love to read it. Honestly this is a great idea for a book and given time the author can really do a lot with it I cant wait for it be published. My favorite part was probably the first sentence when he pulled her closer it gave me a sense of love, and welcomeness you don't get that, that often these days, so it was a nice touch. A few feelings this book gave me so far was as I already said love and welcomeness but also security and I really dont know why maybe that's just the effects books have on some people. Anyway it's very clear that the author is very talented and can do a lot with a pen and paper, I a specially love the description the author uses I find it very help as it helps me to paint a picture in my mind.