Not quite sure
First impression is it sounds childish with the way words are used ‘mummy’ etc. That doesn’t mean to say it wouldn’t be a good read and it sounds like it is progressing as the mum is trying to live her life around her family which is very like real life and what everyone is trying to do.
Cover is good and the green makes it stands out with the bold colours
Cover is good and the green makes it stands out with the bold colours