Hilarious and love the chemistry
I really enjoyed the dialogue between Hildy and Paul. I especially found Hildy hilarious! They seem to have some chemistry even though they are finding each other quite irritating, so I am really interested to see how that develops.
I was unsure of the way the dialogue was presented at first, but it works really well and makes it easy to read. I am impressed that as a reader we don't lose any information using this simple way of writing dialogue.
I was unsure of the way the dialogue was presented at first, but it works really well and makes it easy to read. I am impressed that as a reader we don't lose any information using this simple way of writing dialogue.