I really like Hilda/Hildy. I find her a quirky and relatable character who is quite funny in her misfortunage ways (such as knocking all the toys off the shelf). I really like the style in which it's written too. Sort of like a script. I can picture the two of the, quite clearly and loved the description used for them both. The way it was added in was unique too. Instead of just listing things about them in an obvious way it was added as a part of a character which is cool.
I really like the idea of the story too. I've heard about this study before so i think making it into a more fun story would be cool. It can help people learn a bit about psychology in a more fun and interesting way. I'd love to read more and see where the story goes.
Also i think Paul is a bit of a strange, cocky character. Not sure I'd get along with him and he's annoying me already! I'd like to see the way he adjusts as the interview continues
I really like the idea of the story too. I've heard about this study before so i think making it into a more fun story would be cool. It can help people learn a bit about psychology in a more fun and interesting way. I'd love to read more and see where the story goes.
Also i think Paul is a bit of a strange, cocky character. Not sure I'd get along with him and he's annoying me already! I'd like to see the way he adjusts as the interview continues