wow , impressive! This had me hooked from the very start, the story truly does set the scene and reeled me in from the word 'go'. This felt so ridiculously real and i was able to immerse myself fully. I love when a story makes you feel that you are in it and/or able to visualize and feel exactly what the author is trying to portray. This is the most exciting start to a story i have come across in a very long time.