Hmm..

I thought that I would really like this book however I found it pretty disappointing. It was extremely hard to get into and even after reading about a hundred or so pages, I was still confused. Maybe you could have included a little bit at the start that tells the reader all about the characters and who they are. It could also set the seen for the reader.

I found it extremely hard to carry on reading. I think that the whole plot and idea is good but it is too hard to understand.