Well well well, where to begin, at first glance and first chapter i thought this is going to be really good, got to 2nd chapter and thought what on earth is going on, change in story all together. So i thought ah maybe its a compilation of different stories. On to chapter 3 and realise it is one story. Chapter 4 off topic again. Each chapter was an element, again that confused me as there was no mention of that element in that chapter. Usually you picture the characters in your minds eye, in this i couldn't as the author hadn't clearly described the characters. In some chapters it places you as that character and then other chapters a new character has come in and you haven't got a clue who they are. There is not a comparable book to set the bench mark. Brownie points for how it ended though