This seems intriguing. This first impression for me depicts a sense of true teenage feelings amazingly depicted not just Leah but other people as well, the anxiety and the fear of bullying as well as the search for their true self and ways of growing as people. This seems to explore what it is like for Leah to take a large step into trying something new. This would be interesting to read to find out the backstory of her, how the camp will change her as a person and who interacts with her.