Confusing and hard to follow. I couldn’t get past the first chapter. Seemed a bit rambly and all over the place. Maybe it gets better but I just couldn’t stick with it. A lot of words were overly repeated. Lots of “this happended and then this happened” could use less of that are more showing then telling as my English teacher always says. I feel as though the first chapter could of had more details and descriptions then what it did. Just a personal pefrence but I really prefer longer chapters, I just feel even though it was only the first chapter i read but it could have been longer. So overall only read the first chapter which again was hard to follow but I feel like if you can get past that the story line could be good.