Pulls you in from the start

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The first chapter is filled with mixed emotions, from it being funny to suddenly feeling scared for the character and to wondering what he is capable of. The character is introduced as a scientist and so I immediately knew he is very smart and observant which is then proven when he starts talking about the skeletons. However, when he says in his diary entry that he talks to them this made me wonder what exactly is going through his mind to make him think that talking to the skeletons makes them feel not lonely.

The end of the chapter is the character talking directly to the reader. This made me feel like I am part of the story and that he is aware that I am reading his entries.