Amazing Potential

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Amazing world building with an ambiguous narrator - you see a glimpse of the what the future holds, which draws in the readers, especially with the cliffhanger in the prologue.
The multiple perspectives within the novel which sets up for a beautiful re-evaluation of the original fairy tale, of both the protagonist and the antagonist, along side the narrator - the 'sidekick'. But the multiple perspectives also creates an unreliable narrator - as no one characters knows all the information, so the reader receives a portion of the story from different places.
The novel creates emotional tension with its descriptive words giving goosebumps to the reader.
The only issue is the short chapters - putting a bit more into it allows for the reader to be drawn in for longer as chapter breaks create a momentary distraction from the text.
I cannot wait to see where it goes.