I really like the use of the second person narrative at the start. I feel engagement
Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely friend. Its really stunning and cute and I loved the way the character are so likeable hahahahaha. I enjoyed it so much. As I spend a fair chunk of my life coercing reluctant writers to squeeze out a few more words, it seems somewhat churlish to ask them, at times, to write less. But that’s what I’ve been doing a lot of with some of my pupils recently. Working as a journalist before becoming a teacher means I’m hard-wired to spot superfluous prose. When you have a lot to say on a subject and only 500 words allocated for the column – and God help you if you irritate your sub-editor by thinking they can trim it down from 517 for you – then concise writing becomes a necessity.
Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely friend. Its really stunning and cute and I loved the way the character are so likeable hahahahaha. I enjoyed it so much. As I spend a fair chunk of my life coercing reluctant writers to squeeze out a few more words, it seems somewhat churlish to ask them, at times, to write less. But that’s what I’ve been doing a lot of with some of my pupils recently. Working as a journalist before becoming a teacher means I’m hard-wired to spot superfluous prose. When you have a lot to say on a subject and only 500 words allocated for the column – and God help you if you irritate your sub-editor by thinking they can trim it down from 517 for you – then concise writing becomes a necessity.