Interesting Approach to reinventing yourself
First off, love the inclusion of transcripts/interview snippets, changing the layout of narrative is always appreciated to break up some tense moments and give that tiny bit of detail that the narrator might not necessarily relinquish themselves.
Mayner/Olivia seems desperate to escape her past but something keeps pulling her back to that night, something else seems to be behind the disappearance because she seems so terrified of the memory - it must have been awful to go through it but I wonder what else was out there with her? The mystery is clear from the first page, especially with Olivia/Mayner distancing herself from her own past, not ‘me’ or ‘I’ just ‘the girl’
Mayner/Olivia seems desperate to escape her past but something keeps pulling her back to that night, something else seems to be behind the disappearance because she seems so terrified of the memory - it must have been awful to go through it but I wonder what else was out there with her? The mystery is clear from the first page, especially with Olivia/Mayner distancing herself from her own past, not ‘me’ or ‘I’ just ‘the girl’