My first impression instantly put me on edge, the rising action sounds incredible as we slowly are shown a wide range of senses.
The tension also gradually increases at an amazing speed that isn't too slow or too quick, it's perfect. I'd love to read more and really figure out what this story is about. But to also uncover the secrets within.
The tension build and thrill within the introduction is just incredible itself.
The tension also gradually increases at an amazing speed that isn't too slow or too quick, it's perfect. I'd love to read more and really figure out what this story is about. But to also uncover the secrets within.
The tension build and thrill within the introduction is just incredible itself.