I spotted several grammar errors in this preview, and it seemed both unfinished and frankly unprofessional. I would not have been surprised to see this identified in a fan fiction section rather than an "actual" book.
Whilst of course there's always hope for a book to improve after the preview that we are given, it was really a bit of a drag to get through something that seemed so all over the place and unfinished. Disappointing.
Whilst of course there's always hope for a book to improve after the preview that we are given, it was really a bit of a drag to get through something that seemed so all over the place and unfinished. Disappointing.