david logan

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First Impressions

Last Seen

05/09/2018 – 23:14

The opening hook works well. When the scene shift and the story-proper begins, I'm not quite sure...

The Anomaly

05/09/2018 – 22:50

The book opens with a short, supposedly exciting bit of showing to get the reader hooked (didn't...

A House of Ghosts

05/09/2018 – 22:35

This, on the first page, was a warning sign: "Many was the vessel that had come to grief..." The...